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Poolside  - Chapter Five Part 1 by areg5 Poolside  - Chapter Five Part 1 by areg5
Never let it be said that I don't (occasionally) bow to pressure.  Chapter Five is turning out to be really long.  It was suggested to me that I break it into 2 parts, which I had thought to do but I wasn't sure how long part 2 would be.  I didn't want to rush the project and I think I have a lot more story to tell ...so here's Part 1 of the final chapter.  No animations in this one.  I made some minor changes to the story which I don't think negatively impact the original, and I had an interesting request from one of my favorite artists to include her and her friend in one of my stories, so I figured why not this one?  Written by Louder, edited by me and co-starring the one and only theafromshield.deviantart.com/!

Vimeo version:  vimeo.com/129968360
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ahulke Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
what happened to your videos on vimeo?
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areg5 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That happened before.  I hope they come back.
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
i hope its not a commission...is it another part 1 part 2 type of story?
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I haven't decided yet.  Probably.  I would wouldn't do a commission if it wasn't a good read, and I would make it available purchase after I do it.
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
whats the next one about...what type of transformation is it.... and any special guest reappearing in it?
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well ...it may be a commission.  If not, it will be TG/AR and there will be plenty of guests!  Should be a winner.
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
is it time for a count down or do I have to be a little bit more patient...lol
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have 2 more frames to go, maybe 1 or 2 after proofreading it.
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
Sad its about to end...today right..lol, sorry I can be impatient
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha ha.  Not today.  I hope this weekend.
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Fred100000 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
no :(
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm working on it!  I have 23 more frames to go.
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Fred100000 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
ok well good luck :)
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slaton Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
So how's it coming along?
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its getting there.  Hopefully by the end of the week.  2 more scenes to go.
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sometimesworks Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Great story ! you've definitely added to the original story and brought it out nicely. This was one of my favorites of Louder's writings.

I liked a lot of Louder's stuff, except for the ending to "life's a beach" because of what happened to the character of Frank. He got all the way out to a beach to look for a baby for his wife's sake, getting verbally abused big time by a mouthy teen,  and ended up getting back to a regressed wife, and he was STUCK old. Just didn't seem right. I wish the character of Frank [who I know had his problems - yes he was a jerk, but he still came across as really having loved his wife] had been given one chance and regressed to his wife's age, being warned to behave or else be restored to his original age, instead of how it happened.  Just that once.  Don't get me wrong, I like a lot of Louder's stuff, just that one story's ending really bugged me. that's all.  Anyway, back to this story, great job, Areg5 !
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll have to re-read that one.  I read it a very long time ago.  Glad you like my take on Poolside!  It is my favorite Louder story!
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Romantic-author Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Exceedingly well done!
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why thank you!
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TinyThea Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Areg, that was great! I absolutely love it!! :D :happybounce: I am dying to see next part :) You are the best! :happybounce:
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areg5 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you like it!  I just worked through your regression to a cute little 10 year old.  Hopefully I'll have Part 2 done by the end of next week.  Thanks for the fave!
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TinyThea Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
How could I not fave it? :D

Awesome, I am looking forward to it :happybounce:
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think you'll like how it ends up.  I was thinking of leaving you little, and resolve that in the next story, unless you want me to put you back to normal in this one.
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TinyThea Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, I´ll leave it up to the artist, I want some surprise :D
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problemo!
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TinyThea Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
:happybounce:
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When can I expect to see more better behavior?
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javd25 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 7, 2015
So going on the original story I am guessing that Jenny and Sammy are going to be stuck as children.  I think that unfortunate because if it wasn't for Sally's father, who "accidentally dropped" the original tanning oil his wife would be back to her real age.  Then to top it off he tried to "improve" on the new batch by adding more of the important ingredients hoping to make it possible for anyone who uses it to age more than 10 years.  Because of what he did his wife ended up losing 15 years instead of ten making her 4 years old with no memory of who she was and then blames it on Bobby.  The only ones in my opinion that deserve to be punished for abusing it would be his dad and his dad's best friend.  Anyways good job on the story, I am interested in seeing how different the ending to this story is from the original.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, going by the original story ...but that is not how this one will end.
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TF-SquareSting Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This story just keeps getting better and better! I have a feeling I'll miss these characters as soon as it ends, though...
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.  But you know, when I have really good characters many times they pop up again.
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TF-SquareSting Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, I know they usually do. But it's hardly the same as them showing up in their own story again.
I mean, I'm not requesting for you to continue this, which I'm aware will be an arduous task, if not impossible. But it is still a shame that these characters will hardly get any protagonism again.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well ...Devon and Erin have shown up in Intro to Archeology which was essentially their own story.  They played a very major part in The Clothes Make the Woman.  It can happen, most likely with Gretchen, Bobby and Sally.
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TF-SquareSting Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I'd like to see those three again, certainly. I've grown fond of them the most.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As have I.
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TF-SquareSting Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Although, I gotta say Samantha and Katie have also grown on me.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah.  How couldn't they?
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Good work. The wives will be steamed if they get back to normal. Eager for the next part.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!  I'm working on it!
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome. Have fun and good luck.
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poisonelf Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Is there any chance you will post this on Vimeo?
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll have that up later today.
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reverter1 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Very nice. I take it the Barbie is Jenny's inner child trying to convince her adult mind to stay a child.  Though I still think it would be nice if she was slightly younger, maybe around 2 years old.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That may very well be.  Sorry, Jenny is as little as she's going to get.
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Sakura292004 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
This is very helpful when using the youth morph option.
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!  I'll check that out.  I've just been eyeballing it.
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Areat Featured By Owner Edited Jun 7, 2015
It's quite not the same one for boys, though. ;)


Boys : www.cdc.gov/growthcharts/data/…

Collection :  www.cdc.gov/growthcharts/clini…
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah.
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Sakura292004 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Daz3d  item: The Line Up
You can use this item to adjust the height of the characters. It is pretty accurate.
And use this scale for proper age: www.cdc.gov/growthcharts/data/…
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areg5 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool!
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